Friday, October 18, 2013

Hospes (First 700 Words)


Prologue:
“I knew both children before they went into comas,” whispered the librarian as she looked down at the two pictures on her desk.
She traced her shaky finger over the little girl’s face, along her jaw line and down her neck. Her eyes were black, and although they were amygdaloidal and young, they were tired. They had the faintest lines from more than a few sleepless nights, as if some artist had given a few too many careless pencil strokes around them. She looked forcedly alert, yet exhausted with a sort of burdensome intelligence, and her eyebrows were faint and flat just below her bangs. Her lips were gently pursed together beneath her tiny nose, revealing the tension beneath the indifference she’d feigned with the rest of her facial expression. The boy’s picture on the other hand, was a shot of him smiling, perhaps too hard in fact. A few too many of his teeth were showing, and his eyes were open and light-colored, although black and white photos rarely do justice to eyes like his. The librarian remembered them. Green. Forest green, like little twinkling emeralds. His freckles appeared in the photo though, faintly peppering his cheeks and chin.
One of the officers leaned forward and rested his hand over the corner of the boy’s photo. He looked ahead at the poor little woman wracking her brain for any other memories of the children.
“This is very important, ma’am-“
“Call me Ms. Grey,” she said with a sad smile. The officer nodded.
“Ms. Grey. Please try to remember them. Any information you can offer would be most appreciated.”
She looked down at the pictures and shook her head, which made a tendril of her long silver hair fall over her shoulder, “I remember Wendell, that’s for sure, boisterous boy. Couldn’t sit still for a minute. I had to send him to detention on more than one occasion for being too noisy in the library. That day though, he came in to check out a book. An actual book! I was pleasantly surprised.”
“Which book, Ms. Grey?”
“Hmm…something by Hemmingway I believe…yes, the Old Man and the Sea.”
The officer glanced at his partner who had been scribbling their conversation into a weathered notepad. The partner stopped writing at the mention of the book’s name, and after pausing to direct his wide eyes at the seated officer, he scribbled even more frantically. It was obvious he was a newbie, a younger, handsome man who had heard the legend in the area about that book.
“Thank you, Ms. Grey,” swallowed the police officer, “That could prove very useful.”
There was a silent pause as the old woman stared down at the girl’s picture again.
“Anything else you can remember? Perhaps about Peregreen?”
“Peregrine. Pair-uh-grin. She made certain I knew how to pronounce it before she left. And no…no, I can’t really remember much. Quiet girl. Barely said a word before she checked it out.”
“Checked what out?”
“Well, the book of course,” said the woman.
“I thought Wendell checked it out.”
“No, no,” she smiled, “Wendell wanted to check it out, but Peregrine had already gotten to it. First to check it out in…a very long time.”
“Understandably,” said the officer, glancing at his partner to ensure he was writing all of that down.
The librarian continued to stare at the two young faces and she shook her head.
“I really don’t remember anything else. They were normal children….Do you really think the book could’ve had something to do with it?”
“It’s far too early to tell, Ms. Grey, but we certainly aren’t ruling anything out,” said the officer, “We’ll call you if we need any further information, alright? In the meantime, if you remember anything else, please give us a call.”
The officer reached into his back pocket and pulled out a small card with the police station’s phone number and address, and his name in all-caps across the top: Officer Jeremy Rife.
“Thank you, Officer. I will.”
“Jeremy,” he said, smiling warmly and extending his hand to her. She grinned and shook it.
“Jeremy,” she said, picking up both photos and tapping their edges on her desk to straighten the deck of two, “I’ll call you if I remember anything else.”
She handed him the photos, they said their polite adieus and the officers left the library to interview their next suspect.

First Glimpse at Hospes!

Hello all,

THANK YOU to everyone who's helped me get 100 likes on Facebook! As promised, here are the first 700 words of my newest book Hospes! Enjoy, and PLEASE leave a comment letting me know what you think! :)

(click here to read it!)

Onward & Upward,

Friday, June 14, 2013

Publisher: CONTRACT time!

Hello all,

It's another overcast day here in Seattle, but I have some EXCITING news! I met with my agent for dinner last night in Corvallis (yes, I know. I was visiting for 6 hours strictly on business and didn't think it'd be prudent to tell ALL of my friends that i was in town. But I'll be back to visit very soon, I promise!)

Anyway, she told me that she's finished the final read-through and she'll draw up a contract within the next few days! But that's not even the most exciting part! One of my best friends, who is also a beta-readers and a bridesmaid, was there to pick me up from dinner, and after I'd told my agent about her impressive beta-reading skills, she hired her on the spot and bought her a brand new kindle ten minutes later from the OfficeMax next door!

Needless to say, we're BOTH ecstatic! But it gets even better! Even though my agent told me last night that my book probably won't hit shelves for another year or so, it's for a very good reason. As soon as I sign the contract, she'll send my manuscript to New York so it has a shot at a big-name publisher, an e-book deal, and possibly even a movie!

I'm playing with the big boys now!

Onward and Upward,

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

How to write a book.

Hello all,

I've had a few people ask me the question "So how do you write a book?" and they usually follow it up with "especially when you've got a wedding to plan and a business to run and work 40 hours a week at a coffee shop?"

I'll save the time management bit for another post. You must learn how to write well before you can learn to write fast.

To write a good book, you must do 3 things.

1. Identify your ideal environment

If you aren't comfortable when you write, your book won't be comfortable to read. It'll feel and sound just as strained as you were when you wrote it. Therefore, choosing your environment wisely is very important. Some authors write best laying on the sofa while typing on their laptop. Others can't focus unless they're sitting in a coffee shop with a pen and notebook handy. Some need music, others need complete silence.

Decide for yourself whether you're more productive sitting by a lake or at the library, or on a bench in a public park.



Don't be afraid to leave your laptop at home if you feel too distracted by the internet. Bring headphones or don't, eat while you write or don't, but always write in the environment that's best for you.

2. Know your style: Planner or Surfer?

Do you prefer to list out every single thing you have to get done in a day? Or do you wake up when you need to and see what happens? Personally, I like to plan out the entire plot, begin writing the story, and deviate from the plan as I feel necessary. If you're a planner like me, you may need to list out an outline, scene by scene, noting the most important event in the scene and nothing else (i.e. the reason why you're including this scene in your story at all). There's a tendency to over-plan or include too much detail in your outline. Resist this. It'll spark the urge to write the details in your story.



If you're a surfer, and you prefer to go wherever the turns of the story take you, begin with a simple concept (Like: A young man in a futuristic world finds out he can jump through time dimensions, or a young model gets attacked by a dog and the doctor treating her is the only one who has ever loved her for more than her looks). Then, just start writing. You don't have to start at the beginning. Pick a scene that fits your mood at the time: sad, angry, confused, embarrassed, frustrated, accomplished, etc. and then write with reckless abandon.

3. Become your characters.

As a writer, I encourage you to write, and write unceasingly. When you're not writing, think about writing, play out scenes in your head and talk to yourself in the voices of your characters.



Experience their feelings. If you allow yourself to fall in love with their love interests, so will your readers. If you let yourself hate their enemies, you will inadvertently make their enemies hate-able. To write a convincing story, you must be convinced yourself.

Onward & Upward,

Sunday, April 7, 2013

So WHAT's my cover photo all about?

Hello all,

You've probably noticed a few blog changes (All of them good). It's now super easy to subscribe (just enter your email to the left). I've also added a "Like" button, and a "Follow" button (Feel free to take advantage of those).

A few of you have been asking about my Facebook cover photo. The one that says "Hospes" across it with a little girl standing next to it. It's a preview of the title of my upcoming book and sequel! The first book is called "Somnis" (which means "Dreams" in Latin), and its sequel is called "Hospes (which means "Guest" and "Host").

I'm 10,000 words into Somnis, and I'm loving the story so far (it's so hard to put it down when I have three midterms to study for, but hey.) I can't tell you very much about it yet (agent's orders), but I can tell you it's about a little girl named Peregrine Aoki (pictured in the cover photo) who discovers that the town she just moved to has a very dark secret, and so does her mother. I hope you're all as excited as I am!

Agent Update:

So initially my agent wanted to send The Middle of the Sidewalk to a small publisher in Corvallis. However, she thinks this book could win some substantial literary awards, so she wants to send it to larger publishers in New York! She is currently reading it through one final time before we'll meet with a group of editors. Then they'll review it, and we'll be ready to send it off to the Big Apple in no time! I've already chosen an illustrator for the front cover and planned out a few giveaways (get excited, everyone).

Lastly, thank you ALL for your continued likes and comments on Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads, and Blogger. I couldn't do it without you.

Onward and Upward,

Thursday, April 4, 2013

FINALLY: The Publisher Finished Critiquing the New Ending!

Hello all,

Just when I was starting to get discouraged about being 2,600 words behind in April NaNoWriMo, I got a call from the publisher.

Now, before I say what she thought of it, I want to tell you why I've posted this in a blog and not on my Facebook page. I can't tell you how important it is to get my name out there before I release my first book. If you'd like to support me, the best way to do that is to read my blog, leave a comment or a like or a tweet, or even become a blog subscriber (Just enter your email on the right). I greatly appreciate your continued support on Facebook (61 likes already?? That's phenomenal!). Every 'like,' 'share,' 'comment,' and 'tag' is extremely helpful, so thank you so much!

Now, for the results. The publisher read the new ending to The Middle of the Sidewalk, and she said she loved it! She wants to re-read it immediately, editing for minor errors and consistency discrepancies. I asked her if she thought she'd have it read before I graduated, and she said "Oh, i wouldn't make you wait that long. You've been very patient with me." Hopefully that means that in the next few weeks or so, my precious manuscript will be ready for the next stage in the process!

Onward & Upward,

Monday, March 11, 2013

Breakfast with a Publisher!

Hello all,

I was in Corvallis yesterday (oh how I've missed it!) where I met the publisher for breakfast at the Broken Yolk on 3rd street. I have bad news, good news, and AMAZING news pertaining to that conversation:

Bad news: She hasn't read my manuscript yet because she's been sick with the flu and allergic reactions.

Good news: Although she hasn't read it yet, she's taking a vacation to the tropics this weekend so she can finish it. She said she just can't wait any longer.

AMAZING news: She's going to send my manuscript to four professional editors in New York! (NEW YORK!) The publishing capital of the world! I can't overstate how excited I am!

She said she can't stress enough that I should be promoting myself as an author and telling everyone about my book The Middle of the Sidewalk (you can read the first 400 words here). As always, I appreciate your support and encouragement. If you'd like to help me out a bit, feel free to like and share my author's Facebook page here (It would help a TON!)

Thank you so much everyone. I love you all.

Onward & Upward,