Saturday, September 29, 2012

First Glimpse at my Newest Book: Mimbio!




He was afraid for his life in his own house. He snatched medicines from the cupboards and stuffed homemade quilts into a large sackcloth bag, which was already laden with biscuits and dried fruits and meat and anything else that might sustain his family once they escaped.

If they got out in time.

With trembling hands, he grabbed pairs of socks from the cabinet and crammed them in with the rest of the gear in his makeshift survival kit, avoiding the gaze of the woman at the door. His wife.

He would have to tell her the horror he had brought upon them. Why they were no longer safe in their home, where she’d given their son life seventeen years ago. They had to get out. And for now, there was no time to explain. Whatever was coming sent shivers through his spine.

And few things frightened Hermes Aurelius.

...to be continued.

Writing Goals 2012

Hello all,

I've decided to list out all the goals I have for the rest of 2012. I'm counting on YOU (my faithful supporters) to hold me accountable!

1. Finish editing The Middle of the Sidewalk by October 15th. (Read the first pg.)
2. Place 1st or 2nd in the Suess's Pieces Writer's Week contest on October 22nd.
3. Re-write The Sons of Luther at 80,000 words for NaNoWriMo in Nov.
4. Place 1st in the Windy City Four Seasons Contest in Dec.
5. Finish writing Mimbio by New Year's at 100,000 words. Make it:
          - Action-packed from the beginning
          - Centered around a strong female lead who is also feminine (not sexualized)
          - Unpredictable

As always, thank you for your continued encouragement. I love you all!

Onward & Upward,

Monday, September 17, 2012

Publisher Request!

Hello All,

I can barely contain my excitement! Remember the publisher who gave me the harsh review of my first novel, The Sons of Luther? She just asked me to call her. She said that she couldn't get my book out of her head, and that she wants me to rewrite it so she can critique it again! She gave me SO much good advice, mainly about strengthening my plot and character development. This is what she had to say about me as a writer:

"I think you're a really good writer, you've got talent, there's no doubt about that."

I was surprised to get such a nice critique from her, considering what she said before. But then she continued:

"You're definitely a Kurt Vonnegut or Stephen King kind of writer. You like shocking twists, and yours are well done!"

Did she just compare me to Vonnegut and Stephen freakin' King?! I do believe she did! Just when I thought the conversation couldn't get any better, she capped it off with this:

"If you can pull off these edits and strengthen your character development, I would definitely publish it."

MY ENTIRE WEEK HAS BEEN MADE. Just when I was about to resort to self-publishing, I got the best news of my life! I have hope again, not that I ever felt completely hopeless. Now I know there's a publisher out there who believes I have what it takes! Thank you, everyone, for all your support!

Onward and Upward,

Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Want to Read the First 400 Words?


Hello All,

I'm posting the first 400 words from my book The Middle of the Sidewalk, because I'm entering it into the Seuss' Pieces 2012 Writer's Week contest! Feel free to let me know what you think. (I LOVE feedback!):


Onward and Upward,

The Middle of the Sidewalk: Writer's Week 2012


The following is my entry in Seuss' Pieces 2012 Writer's Week. The prompt I chose was "I'm not..."

I’m not aware of another 12 year old who woke up at 7:26am during summer break like I did. It wasn’t because I had anything important to do. I was supposed to be sleeping in, lazing about, forgetting to brush my teeth, and playing with my brother. Except the voice in my head didn’t tolerate laziness.

And I no longer had a brother.

I had started two school years without him already. This morning, my first day of middle school, marked the beginning of a third. As I stood in front of the bathroom mirror looking down at the two sinks in the counter and the lonely toothbrush in the ceramic cup, starting the day without him didn’t seem right. I looked up at my reflection, at the blonde mass of curls that spiraled from my head in all directions. Casey and I used to be a matched set, with identical hair and crystal blue eyes. But now there was only one brush on the counter, one towel on the rack, and one person I could confide in: myself.

In accordance with my strict morning routine, I went back to my room in my blue cotton pajamas that I wore every night and washed every two. I slipped the shirt off over my head and tossed it in the hamper, replacing it with a solid white one from my dresser. I exchanged my pajama pants for my brown corduroy ones, soft, comfortable, and worn at the knees. Then I sauntered down the stairs and sat down in my rickety chair at the head of the dining table where my mother had my coffee waiting for me.

My poor mother.

There she stood, leaning against the chipping kitchen counter and whisking a bowl of eggs with disinterest, although I’m sure she was making something exciting. A cake perhaps. She used to bake only when she was under unbearable stress, but she had turned out the most beautiful desserts since the accident. I dreaded to see her every morning, quietly going about her routine as she had every day since she lost her youngest. She was an empty shell, a graying spirit, distant and unfamiliar to me.

And yet, somehow I supposed we understood each other because she always had my coffee ready for me at exactly 7:29, and she washed my pajamas at noon every 2 days. She understood my need for routine, and I understood her need for silence.

writers' week writing contest

Monday, September 10, 2012

Agent Reply: The Results are In!

Hello All,

I got a letter today from Sara Megibow at Nelson Literary Agency. Here's what she had to say:

"After a careful reading, we are sorry to say that we don't believe this project is right for our agency."

...That's it.

Months of work brushed aside. And the worst part of all is, I feel like I've let my readers down, you who were so excited to see my progress, my journey, to hear good news about my fruitful efforts. I'm sorry to disappoint you. I'm sorry to disappoint myself.

With a heavy heart, I'll continue researching agents tomorrow when I have more energy. No matter what happens, I won't give up my dream.

Onward and Upward,

Thursday, September 6, 2012

New Character: Elpida (PICS)

Hello all,

You're the first to meet my newest character, Elpida! Resourceful, strong-willed, and a little bit crazy, Elpida is a take-no-nonsense huntress who wields a bowstaff and lives in a cave. She became the 'mom' of the family when her parents died and left her to care for her little brother, Lux, and her baby sisters Ghita and Thisbe.

Elpida is my favorite character so far. She'd fit right in with the Lost Boys in Peter Pan. She's depicted below, holding the sword she uses later in the book, a sword belonging to rebel leader Calix (who I will post about next).



Onward and Upward,

Sunday, September 2, 2012

Romance Writers of America Contest!

Hello All,

I'm a contestant in the Windy City Romance Writers of America's
Four Seasons Contest! My book The Middle of the Sidewalk will be scored on all of the following:

Presentation

Mechanics
Hooks
Setting
Characterization
Plot
Internal Conflict
Dialogue
Narrative
Pacing
Overall Impression

The best part is that I'll get feedback on ALL categories, whether I win or not. I couldn't be more excited! The top prize is TBA. I'll learn if I'm a finalist in the next few months, and the final judging is in December.


Onward and Upward,