Friday, October 18, 2013

Hospes (First 700 Words)


Prologue:
“I knew both children before they went into comas,” whispered the librarian as she looked down at the two pictures on her desk.
She traced her shaky finger over the little girl’s face, along her jaw line and down her neck. Her eyes were black, and although they were amygdaloidal and young, they were tired. They had the faintest lines from more than a few sleepless nights, as if some artist had given a few too many careless pencil strokes around them. She looked forcedly alert, yet exhausted with a sort of burdensome intelligence, and her eyebrows were faint and flat just below her bangs. Her lips were gently pursed together beneath her tiny nose, revealing the tension beneath the indifference she’d feigned with the rest of her facial expression. The boy’s picture on the other hand, was a shot of him smiling, perhaps too hard in fact. A few too many of his teeth were showing, and his eyes were open and light-colored, although black and white photos rarely do justice to eyes like his. The librarian remembered them. Green. Forest green, like little twinkling emeralds. His freckles appeared in the photo though, faintly peppering his cheeks and chin.
One of the officers leaned forward and rested his hand over the corner of the boy’s photo. He looked ahead at the poor little woman wracking her brain for any other memories of the children.
“This is very important, ma’am-“
“Call me Ms. Grey,” she said with a sad smile. The officer nodded.
“Ms. Grey. Please try to remember them. Any information you can offer would be most appreciated.”
She looked down at the pictures and shook her head, which made a tendril of her long silver hair fall over her shoulder, “I remember Wendell, that’s for sure, boisterous boy. Couldn’t sit still for a minute. I had to send him to detention on more than one occasion for being too noisy in the library. That day though, he came in to check out a book. An actual book! I was pleasantly surprised.”
“Which book, Ms. Grey?”
“Hmm…something by Hemmingway I believe…yes, the Old Man and the Sea.”
The officer glanced at his partner who had been scribbling their conversation into a weathered notepad. The partner stopped writing at the mention of the book’s name, and after pausing to direct his wide eyes at the seated officer, he scribbled even more frantically. It was obvious he was a newbie, a younger, handsome man who had heard the legend in the area about that book.
“Thank you, Ms. Grey,” swallowed the police officer, “That could prove very useful.”
There was a silent pause as the old woman stared down at the girl’s picture again.
“Anything else you can remember? Perhaps about Peregreen?”
“Peregrine. Pair-uh-grin. She made certain I knew how to pronounce it before she left. And no…no, I can’t really remember much. Quiet girl. Barely said a word before she checked it out.”
“Checked what out?”
“Well, the book of course,” said the woman.
“I thought Wendell checked it out.”
“No, no,” she smiled, “Wendell wanted to check it out, but Peregrine had already gotten to it. First to check it out in…a very long time.”
“Understandably,” said the officer, glancing at his partner to ensure he was writing all of that down.
The librarian continued to stare at the two young faces and she shook her head.
“I really don’t remember anything else. They were normal children….Do you really think the book could’ve had something to do with it?”
“It’s far too early to tell, Ms. Grey, but we certainly aren’t ruling anything out,” said the officer, “We’ll call you if we need any further information, alright? In the meantime, if you remember anything else, please give us a call.”
The officer reached into his back pocket and pulled out a small card with the police station’s phone number and address, and his name in all-caps across the top: Officer Jeremy Rife.
“Thank you, Officer. I will.”
“Jeremy,” he said, smiling warmly and extending his hand to her. She grinned and shook it.
“Jeremy,” she said, picking up both photos and tapping their edges on her desk to straighten the deck of two, “I’ll call you if I remember anything else.”
She handed him the photos, they said their polite adieus and the officers left the library to interview their next suspect.

First Glimpse at Hospes!

Hello all,

THANK YOU to everyone who's helped me get 100 likes on Facebook! As promised, here are the first 700 words of my newest book Hospes! Enjoy, and PLEASE leave a comment letting me know what you think! :)

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Onward & Upward,